Sample Chapter 1

So this post about a sample chapter from one of my newest novel /novella (I’m still not sure of its length ) . The sequel of Mysterious Women: Blackmail.
It has been named Mysterious Women: Revenge.
The name speaks a volume about the contents of the book. Its about revenge,  now the

revenge will be on whom and be taken whom,  is for me to decide and you to find out.

And how do you do that obviously by going through it after it is released.
I think I will stop boring you with my babbling and jump to the sample chapter.

Chapter 1
Her breathing too shallow for him to feel and listen. “Someone call 911 immediately “, Lucie’s voice no more than a shrill to his ears. He never felt so helpless in his life,  not even when his parents were killed. In this whole fuss of a matter, somebody placed a hand on his shoulder ” Don’t worry son, my girl is a fighter,  she will fight until her last breath “, her father’s words barely seemed like whisper in his ears. Everything around him did. He held hand and kept on holding it even when the paramedics were boarding her on the ambulance. They must have realised his broken down condition so they let him in their vehicle. Her parents , and friends including Ryan followed them in their own cars.
Meanwhile Mitchell  stood behind in the chapel full of guests to investigate. She informed the captain regarding the current situation,  who would be sending one of their agents to help her. Until she was to be on her own.  She asked all the guests to remain in the chapel and not leave the place without her permission. The minister too was under suspicion,  it was the matter of her best friend’s life and she would leave no stone unturned. The minister at first didn’t approve of the act,  later when she threatened to put him behind the bars,  he willingly took his place at the beginning of the queue. But something about the guests seemed amiss.” I wouldn’t unless I start processing my dynamo”,  she smirked  speaking to herself .

P.S. The book cover and release date has yet not been decided But I plan to reveal it soon.

Guys and Gals I seriously need some feedback in this which will help me progress with the upcoming chapters. So please don’t Just like it for the sake of liking. In the future chapters I’m planning to make you people a part of it by letting you decide the fate of the characters.