The first time I told you I had an ex,
You called me a slut –
How passionate had I been for you, those days
Mundane life had passed I thought.
We got married, it was all a fairy-tale
A messed up life was getting settled.
We got an angel, you called her my fault
The time you needed was stolen away;
Realization struck me, you were never sensible,
A beautifully planned life was turning obtrusive;
So deep in love I wouldn’t leave you,
Bearing all the pain and abuse I still loved you
My angel had feared you forever it seemed
Could you not for once love her as you would for a son?
You turned insane , nights were dreadful,
How.did I tolerate you for so long? I thought
Decision made, I left you tagging my angel along,
She bloomed that day, I could see her smile.
You again made me guilty, so I slapped you,
She clapped and said “Mama it was never your fault. “
©Paramita
wow… sad but a good ending. I like good endings.
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Thanks @shatara.. m fan of happy ending. Atleast in my writing I can make tht happn
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Beautifully written, and a great, harrowing theme too
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I’m glad u like it
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Wonderful. This small piece of composition speaks a lot of reality and the decision to let go off the ‘bearing all the pain in the name of love’, that move was very well made.
Sometimes one has to let life make them happy and kill all the bitterness to get their sharpness of sweetness.
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That’s true.. no one should keep on testing the patience.
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Sad tale well told …
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Thanks
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…a sad story that happens oh so often but with a brave and courageous choice made at the end. This was a touching read! 🙂
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I think we woman are no weak species. We can do what we want, when we want to. We just give them enough time.
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks
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You’re welcome:)
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great emotions…touching me a lot..
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Thanks I am glad u like it.
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wow, this makes me feel so sad. Life and relationships show no mercy at times xx wonderfully expressed 🙂
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Thanks I am glad u like it.
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very sad and truth exposed of beings alive
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Definitely life may seem easy, but we never knw wht lies inside
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yes, life is so difficult to judge and it has lot of unexpected events,,,
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Did you face any?.
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everyone face!! not only me….so true
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All right. 😊
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