Go my beloved, don’t shed your tears me,
Just remember I love thee
And will love thee
Till my last breath is snatched away from me –
Have faith in lord, he won’t upset you;
When I step in his threshold, and him his respect due,
Now out you go, let me sleep and have some peace:
Until my soul, the fallens come to seize.
©Paramita
I love your take on sleep – nicely done!
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Thanks Nancy I’m glad you like it
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Simply lovely!
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Thanks
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Welcome!
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It held me emotionally. Nicely done!
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I am glad u like it.
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Absolutely and undeniably a beautiful poem, filled with love!! AHHHHH…LOVE!!!
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Thanks @Josee
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It has captured the emotions well.. Nice one.. 🙂
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Thank you. Those were the parting words of my mom. Though she didn’t say it in a poetic form I framed it that wat
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Oh! Sorry to hear that. Now i read again and it puts forth a lot of different and deep thoughts. My sincere prayers.
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I accept your condolences
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Way sorry
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Nice
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Erased my first comment it’s a very sad writing but I know your mom is happy now so be happy
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I suppose I have to be 😊
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🙂
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Lovely. You captured the scene when my husband died 12 years ago. Thanks for following my blog.
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You’re welcome.. Actually it happened to my mom also
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