Dream

I have always thought what would be my condition I were born in a house full of poverty. Flies lining my food, a total unhygienic life. But I’m pretty sure of one thing I would never stop dreaming putting hope after hope of developing myself into a someone the world would look forward to. In the sonnet I tried to develop a situation where the readers even for a second would think about those unlucky dreamers who dream on throughout lives and perhaps someday their wish is fulfilled.

Dream

A future filled with glee and happiness

Is all they have wanted,

When they’ll have free access

To everything and nothing in life will be shunted.

Drawing in the right path-

And having the right path drawn to you,

May sometimes make us face the devil’s wrath

Yet these brave will do whatever they have to do.

They are the kids who dream,

They dream in their right mind

Living in a place too grim;

Yet nothing can make them halt to stay behind.

Like soldiers they will never let their dreams die,

Hovering over their success they will never sigh.

Girls studying
Girls studying

12 thoughts on “Dream

  1. Meloheart;
    Keep it up this spirit; one day; you will flourish;
    “Yet nothing can make them halt to stay behind.
    Like soldiers they will never let their dreams die,
    Hovering over their success they will never sigh”
    Wishing you all the best.

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    1. πŸ™‚ actually I’m no poet but I took this assignment because I like writing anything and everything. Sonnets are kind of the most difficult forms I ever endured. So i was quite afraid.

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  2. Your keeping hope alive for the less fortunate than you in this poem, it shows your compassion. Giving material things to others in need is fantastic but doing it with compassion is key. keep writing with compassion, it is a step. Even a reminder for you of what you have, driving more compassion for those who do not.

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    1. Thanks I can’t help myself but feel for them. I know there are kids who can do wonders so I feel like helping them, as a student my monetary power is a little weak so I can just make the others aware of this.

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